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This sucks. I'm sorry.

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Link remained smiling, and finally spoke. "I…… I'm going to stay here. Here…… with you Zel." He laughed.

Zelda blush and looked down. "Great……" she looked back up and smiled nervously "Hey…. Link…… Remember the last time we were up here?" She asked, backing away.

"Yeah…….. How could I?" Link laughed and looked a Zelda. His face expression dropped and he stepped up closer to her. "You okay?"

"Uh……. Well…… You know the ceremony….. Right?" Zelda asked, blushing like mad.

"Yeah, Why?" He asked, stepping closer to her.

"Uh……" Zelda stammered, backing away. "Well……. We haven't necessarily fulfilled the whole ritual……… I…."

"And what else do we have to do?" Link asked, getting worried.

"The day we were up there, I was really nervous and thought I was gonna pass out. In the end…. You weren't supposed to jump off the statue……" She started to shake, holding back the urge to jump off the statue and fly away.

"Zel…..? You-"

He took another step toward her and she looked up, showing her face.

"I panicked. I chickened out…….." She shook her head, still looking at him. "I… You were supposed to…"

"Supposed to what?!" Link's eyes widened, hoping it was nothing horrible.

"Kiss me……"

Awkward silence.

Zelda looked away from Link and he looked away from Zelda.

"I…… Was…." He whispered, a little shocked and happy. Although, if she hadn't have lied about the ritual, he could have already told her about his feelings before the whole journey. Then again, It was also a good thing for a few reasons.

"I... you don't have to! I already pushed you off a statue… You've done enough… Especially considering you saved my life!"

Link blushed A bright red. He had dreamed of this moment, but dreaming was easier than doing.

Zelda looked over the edge and really considered jumping off. She looked at Link, who was lost in thought, and jumped. She pulled out her sailcloth and slowed her fall down.

She used him. And then she asked him to kiss her. 'I'm such a jerk…'

Link noticed her figure's absence and looked up to see her gone. He ran and looked over the edge.

Zelda was nearly to the ground, wishing that she was already on the ground and running away. 'Wow Zelda. Running away from your problems instead of fixing them. You're just so smart…'

Link, without thinking, jumped off and leaned forward, causing him to fall faster to catch up with her.

"Zel? Stop!" Link cried, still red a little and running after Zelda as she got to the crack in the ground where the Goddess statue area had ended.

"I……" She stammered, looking down as he got closer.

She looked up and met his eyes. "I…….." She stopped. His eyes were beautiful. She couldn't help but get lost in them.

She quickly looked away and walked past him back over to the statue. "I'm sorry. I'm stupid. You don't have to finished the-"

Link turned her around and looked in her eyes. He slid his hand down her arm and finally got to his hand to hers. He pulled her closer to her and smiled. "Did I forget to tell you how much I missed you?" He asked, smiling.

Zelda got lost in his eyes again and didn't notice how close they were standing. She shook her head and he drew closer to her. His face was soon so close, she couldn't breath. She felt her heart race and beat fast against her chest.

Link leaned in even closer till he could feel her breathing against his skin. He smiled again and his lips meet hers.

Zelda's heart leaped out of her chest and she closed her eyes. Sadly, He didn't kiss her for very long. He pulled away and their eyes met as both of them smiled.

"Was that good enough?" Link chuckled and let go of her hand.

Zelda frowned instantly and she shook her head. "No." She stated blankly.

Link's expression fell and her looked down then back up in shame. His blue eyes sparkled in the light. He looked irresistible.

Zelda grabbed his shirt and pushed him against the goddess statue. She looked in his eyes and pressed her lips against Link's and her eyelids slid shut in pleasure. She felt like flying. She felt… Happy…

Link was in shock, but it soon wore off and he smiled against her lips. He kissed her back and put one of his hands on the back of her neck and the other around her waist.

Zelda move her hands up to his face. One ran through his hair and one stopped at the nape of his neck. She was finally having the kiss she was longing for.

They finally pulled away and smiled to each other lovingly.

"I was wondering when that would happen." Someone said, laughing.

Zelda looked behind her, startled, and saw her father standing there, smirking. 'Oh goodness he looks like a goofball' Zelda smiled to herself "Oh…. Hello Father…." Zelda laughed nervously, noticing Groose and his buddies behind him.

"Heheh…….. Um how much of that did you see…?" Zelda asked shyly.

Groose smirked and laughed that stupid laugh of his. "From the first kiss-"

"To the second one." Cawlin and Strich laughed.
I'm sorry you read this.

YAY. IT'S FINISHED.

AND I THINK IT'S MUCH BETTER.


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Meganfluff Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
XDXDXDXDXD:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D;););););););):):):):):):):) SO CUTE!
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Ana-Link19 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
jojo very good:3
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :aww: :meow:
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ManofChrist777 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
This is the best 'After' story i've read, very well done.
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: Thank you :)
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Zelda01Fan Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ha-Ha,Lol Groose!
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yus >D
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Zelda01Fan Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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ZeldaFREAK1432 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I actually think this is worse...I can see the drama in Zelda and her wanting to leave the world with her guilt of using him, but Link saves her in the end, showing he loves her too.
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
D:
Worse?
Man, I must be a horrible writer then if this is crap *Even though there where typos and crap :/*

;~;
Listen, that's not at all what the first one is saying. The first one is saying, "I had an annoying friend bugging me, so I made Zelda try to comment suicide to get rid of my anger." :icontruestoryplz:

(The friend is Jess btw)

And so, it's not saying anything about him loving her, or her WANTING to leave the world, it's saying, she's embarrassed so she jumps off the statue to her doom.

The expressions I write in the first one are BAD and the words are cheesy. VERY LITTLE of the actual FF is in this, cause I changed a lot, and still missed a few errors... ^^;

But by NO means should this be worse then that devil-like original FF >.<

Sorry for the rant, but this comment made my heart die >.<

And suicide is never a good thing, so how is the other one better?!?!?
Oh, the other one make me... UGH.

I want to delete it but I won't...
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RetroGamingFan72 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I always change my opinion >.< I'm SO SO SO SO SO SO Sorry for that comment, honestly now, I feel this version is actually better.
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay :3

As long as you have your priorities straight on that, I'm good :3

Oh, and if this comment doesn't make sense it's cause it's almost two am and Jess won't let me sleep
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Zelda01Fan Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I absolutely love it!
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This one?
*speakingtoherself* Iswearifit'stheotheroneIwillgodieinaholecauseit'sreallythatbad //shot
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Zelda01Fan Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha,you're funny!I did mean this one,silly!
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD Sorry, confusionnnnnn

Thank you! :aww:
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Zelda01Fan Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD Iz O.K.!Everyone gets confused once-in-a-while!

Oh,and you're welcome!
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I get confuzled toooo much ovo
lol confuzled XD
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ZeldaFREAK1432 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DON'T DELETE IT, I LOVE IT. Suicide is bad I guess, but it fills out the drama in Zelda's mind of wanting to leave the world. It seems to me a romance, and I liked the old one A LOT better, sure you could edit out the typos but then it would be fine, but the whole "pulling out her sailcloth before she hits the ground" sounds lame to me...and I like cheesy sounding stuff if it's romance, I mean LINK SAVED HER, TELL ME THAT'S NOT SWEET OF HIM, of course, that's why I write all that cheesy crap known as Another Legend of Zelda Story.
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I dun see why, it looks like Barney decided to change up the word in that to fit what's he'd say o-o
Yus, suicide is bad, and stupid. >.> She doesn't wanna LEAVE THE WORLD, she wants to protect it, she wants to get away from LINK, cause she feels like she was a jerk to him before.
Listen. Sure it may sound more romantic, but let's face it, it's not realistic for someone to commit suicide like that... Pulling out her sailcloth before she hits the ground is more LOGICAL and LIKELY TO HAPPEN. I think this one is better for the fact that:
a. It doesn't sound like I'm quoting Barney
b. THERE IS NO COMMITTING SUICIDE. >.<
c. It's more likely to have happened in the game
d. the old one was OOC
e. the description was reeeeeeally bad...
f. it's to cheesy to be liked. It really is...
g. YES THERE IS FLAWS ALL THE WAY UP TO G. >D

But anyway ovo

Link saving her is extremely sweet, but if I wrote it as he where saving her in a non life threatening way (like committing freakin suicide >.<) You have to look at it at the right angle,not the never-will-happen-in-a-million-years-angle.
If this type of scene where in a Zelda game, people would stop buying Zelda games ovo
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TheBlackLynx Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
Awww so cute!!!! :meow:
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconblushplz:
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TheBlackLynx Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
:tighthug:
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SMasterStories Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Writer
Awesome story!! I love Skyward Sword!! :D
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :aww: And me too!
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SMasterStories Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Writer
You're very welcome!! :D:hug:
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GameMasterKyro Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I half-expected it to go farther.
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Waaa? What go further o-o *Clueless*
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GameMasterKyro Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
As in :icondasexplz:
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RetroGamingFan72 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She doesn't write that stuff, she's only 13.
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GameMasterKyro Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know that now. But even she admitted that it seemed like it was going a little in that direction.
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TARDISDRELEVEN Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
Dude this is a Zelink fanfic not 50 Shades of Grey. If you really think that should of happened you are a massive idiot and you need to go to therapy
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GameMasterKyro Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, please. Overreact much? A story, real or not, can go as far as the author wants it to.
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TARDISDRELEVEN Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Are you the author? NO. Is there any mention of that in ANY Zelink fanfic by Zelink4eva123 at all APART from them having a kid? NO. So it would be kinda obvious she doesn't write things like that
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TARDISDRELEVEN Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Are you the author? NO. Is there any mention of that APART from Zelda and Link having a kid? NO.
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Zelda01Fan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O.o...
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh...

Oh NOPE. I don't write... um... that... kind of stuff...
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GameMasterKyro Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It seemed like it was going in that direction...
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... o-o
Yeah... It kinda does... o-o
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GameMasterKyro Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol.
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SheikaZen Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student General Artist
That was cute :)
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: Thanks :)
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Megie-Chan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
okay, I can so see this happening now that I think about it. and not just in my mind. My friend and I started to make this with our sketch pages it was so much fun! I loved it so much. Please make more!
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: You liked it? YAY :dummy:

And I might in the future, but I still need to finish a story I'm working on
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Megie-Chan Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
okay :3 also
EDxWINDRY FTW! woot LOVE that couple!
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsuperw00tplz: :highfive:
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CecilyRoseMidnight Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I loves it!!! I love ZeLink. SO. MUCH. I've been waiting forever for them to get together. And the only place they get together is in fanfiction.... NINTENDO Y U NO MAKE LINK AND ZELDA KISS AND GET MARRIED?????!!!!!!

Well, I personally love this rewrite so much more than the actually game... Kudos to you for that! XD

I love how Zelda runs away, it seems so much unlike her, and yet it seems so much like her. And Link... oh Link... You nailed his personality and actions (in my opinion) perfectly.

So, pretty much, I hit the jackpot when reading this? Yup. Lol.
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
IKR it's sooooooo easy to do and all the Zelink fans like us would love to see it and UGH. NINTENDO FRUSTRATES ME.

And awwww, Really?

XD Yes, Zelda runs away like a coward :dummy: XD And Really? I was a little afraid of him being a little Ooc (Out of Character), but really?

:aww: :tighthug:
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RetroGamingFan72 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's probably because Nintendo sees there's Zelinkers...and MAAAAAAANY other LinkxWhatever pairings with thousands of supporters for each one, and if ONLY Link and Zelda were together, it would cause a fan war between all the other pairing supporters and Nintendo, and probably a lot less people would buy Zelda games. So be lucky Zelda games are still being made, aware the fact that as I said, if there's only one pairing, Zelink, in the long run, millions of Anti-Zelinkers would refuse to take part in buying Zelda games. I'm not against Zelink at all, why I sent a letter to Nintendo about it years ago, but I'm just statng why Nintendo's not doing it, and Miyamoto is generally stubborn about things.
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Zelee5465 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I know. I've thought over this Zelink thing over and over but the majority of the fans are either Zelinkers or really don't care, so there's hardly any harm done.

And did you decide to go comment stalking or something? Cause I posted that comment a loooooong time ago... o-o
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